Hey Gail, thanks for re submitting this assignment. you have done a great job correcting the minor things that I suggested. Everything is working well. Your value system and color tones are well balanced how ever there is one area that is not working. Its no big deal but dose need to be corrected to…
Read MoreHey Ken thanks for re submitting this assignment. There are three basic things that still need some work to bring this up to the standards we are shooting for. As i mentioned before in the last critique the basic structure of the painting is fine but you are still having a little struggle with the…
Read MoreHay Gail, Thanks for submitting this assignment. I really do like this painting very much. you did a great job on blending. The painting is very soft and clean. you really only have some minor problems that need adjusting. The sky and first layers of distant mountains are great . You got the values and…
Read MoreHey ken thanks for submitting this assignment. Starting with the sky. You did a good job painting the sky however all of the colors are too strong . The yellow needs to be toned down. it competes with the foreground and throws the value system. so tone it down by about two values. Now the…
Read MoreHey Gail Thanks for resubmitting this assignment. The suggested changes you made really did help this painting look more natural and professional. The water appears more level and the rock formation on the left has a better tone for that area of the painting. You are getting better with every painting. This truely is one…
Read MoreHey Gail thanks for submitting this assignment with the corrections . I must say the changes you made really put this painting in another category. By the way please accept my apology for the long delay but I ended up with an unintended case of Covid with some extra complications. But I am back to…
Read MoreHi, Ken– Thanks for resubmitting this assignment. Sorry for the extreme delay but I ended up with a case of covid and was not expecting it to set me back so much. But I am back to work now and ready to help you get to the next assignment. First of all this painting has…
Read MoreHey Gail thanks for submitting this assignment. Sorry for the delay but I had to take a break from non stop 12 ad 15 hour days. but back to work now. As usual you did a beautiful job. You only have a few minor value and color issues we need to deal with. First your…
Read MoreHey, Ken, Thanks for resubmitting this assignment. It still seems we have a slight disconnect in my critique. Once again the over all structure of your painting is very good and the distant mountains and sky are great. The problem is in the overall color and contrast of the middle and foreground rock formations. The…
Read MoreDear Ken, thanks for submitting your assignment. After a careful study of your painting, I notice many technical issues that need to be discussed in detail — too many when limited by this format.. So as I have done for several of my advance students, I’d like to arrange a call to discuss the main…
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