Hey Gail Thanks for resubmitting this assignment. The suggested changes you made really did help this painting look more natural and professional. The water appears more level and the rock formation on the left has a better tone for that area of the painting. You are getting better with every painting. This truely is one of your best attempts so far and one of my favorite paintings you have done. Just always remember all of the technical aspects of a painting and your work will continue to improve greatly. The next assignment will challange you so you can really learn to use all of your artistic skills. Keep up the good work and I cant wait to see how you handle the next assignment . God bless you and stay inspired.