Dear Ken, thanks for submitting your assignment. After a careful study of your painting, I notice many technical issues that need to be discussed in detail — too many when limited by this format.. So as I have done for several of my advance students, I’d like to arrange a call to discuss the main issues — and then you can correct those and resubmit. Please send Donna your availability to do a phone call with me. You can email her at support@yarnellschool.com. Thank you and God Bless, Jerry
