Hey Gail thanks for re submitting this assignment. Please accept my apology for the delay in getting back to you. I had a minor medical issue and had to spend a little time in the hospital. And then a few days of recovery. But I am back at it full time now and trying to…
Read MoreHey Ken thanks for re submitting this assignment. Sorry for the delay but have been extremely busy but finally back on track and trying to get caught up. You have made some great progress on this painting. But there are still some things you need to work out. Nothing major but at this advanced level…
Read MoreHi, Gail thanks for submitting this painting. The overall affect and composition are good but you do have some technical issues with the color scheme,value system and some negative space issues. first your water is way too blue. You can have some blue in the water but also need to pick up some of the…
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Read MoreHello, Ken, Thanks for submission of this painting. You are making progress. I have spent a lot of time studying your painting to figure out the best way to explain some of the problems you are having. You have improved your value system to some degree but you still have some gradation issues which simply…
Read MoreHey Ken thanks for submitting this assignment. Your sky turned out very good and the falls are good to. The problem you have is with your value system on the rock formations and on the row of pine trees just to the left of the first waterfall. They are too dark they need to be…
Read MoreHi, Gail, Thanks for re submitting this assignment. I must say you did a great job re structuring the leaf canopy on the trees. And over all this painting is one of your best pieces. Now there are some very minor things that really dont justify re submitting but would help make the painting more…
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Read MoreHi, Gail, thanks for submitting this assignment. Well as usual Gail you did a great job. your distant mountains turned out great. The structure of all of your objects are done well and your painting technique is really improving. The main problem you have with this painting is your value system in the middle and…
Read MoreHey, Ken, Thanks for resubmitting this assignment. Wow this time you got the rocks looking really good. Now they look more like rugged rocks. They are a little busy but you did such a good job I would much rather you leave them as they are and not mess with them. Also the waves are…
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