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Hey Gail – Hope all is well with you and you are enjoying the winter. Thanks for re-submitting this assignment. The corrections that I suggested for you to do really did help bring the painting into technical compilance . So Gail since you are one of my advanced students I dont want to put you…

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Gail, returning this to you per your request that you inadvertently uploaded the wrong photo. Thanks! Donna

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Hey Gail thanks for submitting this assignment. At first glance I really like the basic concept of the composition, color scheme and value system however there are a few things that you need to change to make it technically correct and balanced.  First I really like the sky tones they are nice and soft and…

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Hey Ken thank you so much for getting this assignment done so quickly. Well those two minor changes did the trick . Now everything is technically correct and in balance. I hope you can see the difference. Now your boulders don’t appear to be floating and the distance pine trees don’t stick out so much.…

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Hey Gail thanks for submitting this sketch. I love the long horizontal format. However I do Have some suggestions. Long narrow painting are very challanging to compose. Now your basic composition is good but we can improve on it. First of all you need to make one of the most distant mountains more dominate. The…

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Hey Ken Thank you so much for submitting this assignment. I owe you an apology for the long delay in grading this painting . So I ask that you forgive me. Im not quiet  sure what  happened. Everything has been so hectic and busy that some where along the way this assignment got lost in…

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Gail, Thanks so much for re submitting  this assignment. Sorry for the delay but we have been extremely busy and am behind on everything but finally getting caught up. The good news is you have finally got this painting in really good shape. The composition, value system, color scheme and the negative space issues all…

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Hey Gail thanks for re submitting this assignment. Please accept my apology for the delay in getting back to you. I had a minor medical issue and had to spend a little time in the hospital. And then a few days of recovery. But I am back at it full time now and trying to…

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Hey Ken thanks for re submitting this assignment. Sorry for the delay but have been extremely busy but finally back on track and trying to get caught up. You have made some great progress on this painting. But there are still some things you need to work out. Nothing major but at this advanced level…

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Hi, Gail thanks for submitting this painting. The overall affect and composition are good but you do have some technical issues with the color scheme,value system and some negative space issues. first your water is way too blue. You can have some blue in the water but also need to pick up some of the…

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