Gail thanks for submiting this rough sketch. Over all this is a very good composition. There are only a couple of changes i would suggest. First of all I would make that pile of large rocks in the lower right much smaller. As they are now they are way too big and overwhelm the other…
Read MoreHey Ken Thanks for re-submitting this assignment. It looks like you did a great job making the suggested changes. However there are a few odds and ends I would like to bring to your attention. These are things you can do on your own without having to re submitt. Over all this is a very…
Read MoreHello, Ken– Thanks for resubmitting this assignment. The suggested changes you made Really did help the painting to be more technically correct. As I mentioned before Your value system, color scheme and composition are good. The rocks and boulders are well placed and their color and value turned out really good. However they are…
Read MoreHey Ken thanks for sending this assignment. Just as I sat down to grade your painting Donna walked in my studio and said wow that is really beautiful and colorful. She is right you did a great job with your color scheme and your value system. Very clean crisp and clear. But as you might…
Read MoreHey Gail – Hope all is well with you and you are enjoying the winter. Thanks for re-submitting this assignment. The corrections that I suggested for you to do really did help bring the painting into technical compilance . So Gail since you are one of my advanced students I dont want to put you…
Read MoreGail, returning this to you per your request that you inadvertently uploaded the wrong photo. Thanks! Donna
Read MoreHey Gail thanks for submitting this assignment. At first glance I really like the basic concept of the composition, color scheme and value system however there are a few things that you need to change to make it technically correct and balanced. First I really like the sky tones they are nice and soft and…
Read MoreHey Ken thank you so much for getting this assignment done so quickly. Well those two minor changes did the trick . Now everything is technically correct and in balance. I hope you can see the difference. Now your boulders don’t appear to be floating and the distance pine trees don’t stick out so much.…
Read MoreHey Gail thanks for submitting this sketch. I love the long horizontal format. However I do Have some suggestions. Long narrow painting are very challanging to compose. Now your basic composition is good but we can improve on it. First of all you need to make one of the most distant mountains more dominate. The…
Read MoreHey Ken Thank you so much for submitting this assignment. I owe you an apology for the long delay in grading this painting . So I ask that you forgive me. Im not quiet sure what happened. Everything has been so hectic and busy that some where along the way this assignment got lost in…
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