Hey, Ken, Appreciate your efforts on this painting — but there seems to be a miscommunication on how it needs to be done. So, I want you to move on to assignment #8 – which I will write out for you in next few days and send to you. Then when you come in May…
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Read MoreHello, Ken–Thanks for submitting this assignment. Also please accept my apology for the long delay. I had an un expected medical issue and ended up in the hospital for a few days and then a long recovery. But I am now back to work and trying to get caught up. I really do like this…
Read MoreHey, Ken, thanks for submitting this assignment. Sorry for the delay. We have been in the process of moving and i am behind on everything. Any way I really like the composition. However you do have several technical things to deal with. I like your sky very much. The value system of the distant mountains…
Read MoreHello, Ken thanks for being so patient. We have been moving our home and studio to another location.So we got way behind on our work. But now we are up at full strength. This painting turned out very nicely.The changes you made are really good. So your mountains, fog/mist look great. The waterfall is great…
Read MoreHello, Gail, Thanks for submiting the corrected version of this assignment. Thanks for being patient with the long delay. Its been a zoo around here . This painting turned out really ,really well. You did a great job with the corretions. I dont really have any major suggestions. However the canopy of leaves on the…
Read MoreHey Ken thanks submitting this assignment. Sorry I am little behind but have been extra busy. Ok as I have mentioned before the main problem you seem to be having is your blending technique. You tend to have very hard/harsh edges specifically on the road and shadows in the grass plus the shadows are too…
Read MoreHey Gail Hope you’re doing good. Thanks for submitting your most recent assignment. The over all concept of this painting is very good. Your sky is very good and background values and mountains are in good shape. The waterfall barn and stream are really well done. However you do have a couple of issues with…
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Read MoreGail thanks for submiting this rough sketch. Over all this is a very good composition. There are only a couple of changes i would suggest. First of all I would make that pile of large rocks in the lower right much smaller. As they are now they are way too big and overwhelm the other…
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